Originally published on January 14, 2010.
On the other side of my dream
is a rain drop from the sky.
On the other side of my dream
is the smell of an apple I give to my dad.
On the other side of my dream
is a mirror, shiny as the sea.
On the other side of my dream
is a clam shell coming from the bottom
of the sea of my dream.

By Olivia, 1st grade
[photo by wild goose chase via flickr]

Click above to hear Olivia read her poem.

apad2This poem is featured as part of the 2009 A Poem A Day campaign, a National Poetry Month celebration by WITS that features a different poem by a WITS student every day during April. Click on the logo to the left to learn more.

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  1. Ms. Donohoe's Class

    Hi Olivia,
    “You are a talented person.” -Angel

    “You are awesome and cool.” -Diego

    “Perfect writing.” -Andre

    “She knows how to make poems.” -Victoria

    “That was beautiful.” -David

    “Beautiful Writing!” -Ms. D

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