Go inside a raindrop
where it is cold. I see a rainbow down
the smooth side. As the rain falls,
I jump
up and down
inside the raindrop
As the rain falls,
I hear loud thunder.
I jump rope to calm myself down.
As I scream,
I hear my loud echo answering back to me.

by Samantha, 4th grade
J.R. Harris Elementary School

writing prompt = “Stone” by Charles Simic

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  1. Cami

    I am in 4th grade too and i was just finishing up my final copy of my free vers poem today and in science i was suppost to find out what is inside of a raindrop and i came to your poem!!! I am sooooooo glad i did


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