Lost Our Track

Posted February 12, 2009.

 

While the heart turns black
we lost our track
the heart must mend
but I don’t have a clue

we lost our track
what was told was true
but I don’t have a clue
of what I should do

what was told was true
I didn’t believe
what I should do
I think he’ll leave

I didn’t believe
the heart must mend
I think he’ll leave
while the heart turns black

By Alyssa, 7th grade
[photo by kreg.steppe via flickr]

No Responses to “Lost Our Track”

1. 

   Tumblewords

   Oh. The angst of this one strikes home. Good work!

   February 12th, 2009 Reply
2. 

   Linda Jacobs

   I like this pantoum! Great use of repetition!

   February 12th, 2009 Reply