The warm air.
The bright sun.
The flowers coming from everywhere.
The cold water like ice in the pool.
The shining fish in the water.
The people on boats fishing.
The beach way.
The people splashing in warm water.
The people surfing on the waves-it feels like flying through the air.
The birds flying in the air to their nests tweeting.
People playing.
The smooth wet sand.
The white seagulls.
The animals all around.
Summer is the best season of all.
by Jack, 3rd grade
Melanie-bd
This poem is really “summer” at it’s most pure essence. Thank you for sharing such a breezy look at summer.
love-bd
christine
Jack, after reading your poem I’ve decided to leave my computer for a while and see if I can go experience some of the joyful scenes you recreate here.
Tumblewords
Exactly summer! Nice work!!
Sweet Talking Guy..
Cool summer poem Jack! And I love the way you’ve laid it out too.
stan ski
Summertime and the seaside – it’s what it’s all about!
Fishing Savior
Love the poem! Makes me want to go out on the waters.
Now Poon
wow a 3rd grader wrote this??? I love it. You should be really proud of the transformation of creativity applied to writing at that age. Wonderful effort Jack!
R.Marler
I really like this poem. It really captures the highlights of summer. Plus, you’re only a 3rd grader, & that’s remarkable that you can do that.