Space

Posted April 15, 2010.

I whisper to my mom.
I whisper to her about space.
I say that there are eight planets.
I tell her that there are stars.
I say there are galaxies.
I tell her that I like space.
My mom tells me
that she likes space too.

By Aneesh, 3rd grade
[photo by NASAJPL via flickr]

Originally published February 17, 2010.

This poem is featured as part of the 2009 A Poem A Day campaign, a National Poetry Month celebration by WITS that features a different poem by a WITS student every day during April. Click on the logo to the left to learn more.

6 Responses to “Space”

1. 

   wordwand

   a lovely kid poem, well done.

   February 17th, 2010 Reply
2. 

   rreagler

   i love this one too

   February 17th, 2010 Reply
3. 

   srinivas

   Aneesh,
   Very nice poem. Congratulations and keep doing good work.

   February 17th, 2010 Reply
4. 

   neel

   lovely poem keep up the creativity

   February 17th, 2010 Reply
5. 

   XPD

   lovely. Takes you right to that intimate moment between mother and daughter before bedtime. Great work Aneesh!

   February 21st, 2010 Reply
6. 

   non

   very good job. keep up the good work

   February 23rd, 2010 Reply