I whisper to my mom.
I whisper to her about space.
I say that there are eight planets.
I tell her that there are stars.
I say there are galaxies.
I tell her that I like space.
My mom tells me
that she likes space too.
By Aneesh, 3rd grade
[photo by NASAJPL via flickr]
Originally published February 17, 2010.
This poem is featured as part of the 2009 A Poem A Day campaign, a National Poetry Month celebration by WITS that features a different poem by a WITS student every day during April. Click on the logo to the left to learn more.
wordwand
a lovely kid poem, well done.
rreagler
i love this one too
srinivas
Aneesh,
Very nice poem. Congratulations and keep doing good work.
neel
lovely poem keep up the creativity
XPD
lovely. Takes you right to that intimate moment between mother and daughter before bedtime. Great work Aneesh!
non
very good job. keep up the good work